Weekend Writing Warrior 6/13/21 #8Sunday

Heartsbane logoWelcome back for the Weekend Writing Warriors blog hop, where a bunch of writers share 8-10 sentences from a current or recent WIP. I’m continuing to share from book 3.5 of my Heartsbane Saga series of fairy tales retold in a world of Vikings.

This story is a retelling of The Ugly Duckling, and it centers on Uli, the childhood nurse of Prince Brandulfur who accompanies him on all his adventures, even when he’s grown up. This week’s snippet continues on directly from last week’s, which ended with Uli’s stepfather asking to speak with her after breakfast (that she cooked poorly).

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He didn’t say anything as he studied her. She knew he had no cause for judgment, not this time. All her morning chores were completed at least adequately, and both her spear and her sling were hidden in the woods beyond their farm; she’d only needed to learn that lesson once.

“Jarl Magni and his sons will be visiting our home tonight. I can’t have them eating half-raw duck or rock-hard bread, or have mead spilled in their beards, or whatever new mayhem you’ll cause this time. They’re here for your sister Ingvild anyway, so your presence won’t be missed.” He raised an eyebrow. “Understood?”

“Yes, Father,” Uli said said dutifully.

“Go on, then.”

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And the rest of that scene:

Uli nodded and went outside. As soon as she reached the stables, she broke into a grin. Magni and his insufferable sons were from two villages over, and their visits nearly always lasted several days. Which meant she would have several days of time to herself, with no expectations to be a dutiful housewife-in-training.


  1. Ahh, this worked out well for her! I wonder what she’ll do with all this free time… :) Great job!

  2. That certainly works out well for her! Enjoyed the snippet…

  3. That does seem to have worked out, almost like she planned it. :)

  4. What a relief! I’m surprised her stepfather isn’t trying to foist her off on of the obnoxious brothers.

  5. She definitely sees the upside to her exclusion from the visit! lol

  6. I can certainly understand her glee. What an horrid stepfather!

  7. I have the feeling the half-raw duck and rock-hard bread weren’t an accident.

  8. Uli’s stepfather seems absolutely dreadful. I’m glad that she’s able to get away from him.
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  9. I’m glad she’s happy with the situation!

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