Apparently my novel confuses the hell out of people. Personally I like the different tone between Kasey’s and Andrew’s chapters, but if no one reading it does, then what I think doesn’t really matter, now, does it?
So, I’m giving in and rewriting Kasey’s chapters in 1st person present tense POV, instead of 3rd person past POV, to match Andrew’s. Because let’s face it – Andrew is a much more interesting character than Kasey. I’m also hoping that with 1st person she’ll appear more three-dimensional and readers will connect with her better.
Eight chapters to rewrite. Looks like I’ll be busy for awhile.