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Six Sentence Sunday – 4/15/12 #sixsunday

This week’s six are from my novel that I’ll be starting to query this week.  (Maybe if I say it enough, it’ll actually happen?)  The main character Andrew is trying to break things off with the female MC, Kasey.

“I don’t want to hurt you but I’m going to, Kasey. I’m going to hurt you bad, and I don’t know how I’ll live with that.  I don’t mean to, but I always disappoint the ones I love, and to be honest, I don’t really understand it myself. Maybe I hurt to keep from hurting?” He shook his head as if trying to clear his thoughts, wipe his mind fresh. “I can’t seem to control it, and loving and hurting both feel right, because both of them are part of me.”

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Six Sentence Sunday – 4/8/12 #sixsunday

Here’s six from a fantasy/romance short story I’ve been working on for the last year or so.  Eleanor works in the castle kitchens and has caught handsome, arrogant Lord Ellerbee’s eye.

“Lord Ellerbee requests that you join him for a private dinner tomorrow night, so that he may fully make amends.”

“Aye, I bet that’s exactly what he has in mind,” Eleanor said as she started walking away from the squire.

“You can’t turn down his lordship,” he said, his eyes wide.

“I am a free woman, and I can do whatever I please.”

“Yes, but…but….”

“Fine, then tell his lordship I would rather spend time with my family than listen to his stories about how wonderful he is and his loaded compliments of my appearance, tell him there are plenty of other women working in his kitchens who would willingly wear his jewels and share his bed, and most importantly tell him he’s wasting his time.”

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Six Sentence Sunday – 3/25/12 #sixsunday

Today’s six are from a short story I’m revamping, “The Road to Durrës.”  Mhll, an Albanian shopkeeper, has fallen in love with Grace, an American nurse.

She looked down at her hands, then back at him as she said,  “We were meant to be, Mhll.”

It took all his effort not to stare at her, not to take her in his arms and kiss her. Perhaps it was only because he hadn’t seen her in so long, only in his memory, but she seemed even more beautiful than before. More beautiful than the night when she’d said she would marry him, the night before she’d left without explanation, without even saying goodbye. “We were not meant to be, Grace. You showed that when you left.”

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Six Sentence Sunday – 3/18/12 #sixsunday

This week’s six are from a short story I started writing after wandering through the Mississippi Delta (which is one of the most poverty-stricken parts of the country, partially because it’s so rural with no job opportunities).  This story is about two families affected by flooding.

“Ritchie,” Granddaddy said to me, “who created the world?”

“God did, Granddaddy.”

“And who floods it?”

“Well, my teacher said it ain’t nobody’s fault, just the snow melting up in Minnesota with no other place to go.”

“Your teacher’s an idjit,” he said, then paused, sucked on his teeth. “Mother Nature floods us in Cairo, cuz no matter if’n it be a woman on Earth or a woman in Heaven, she gonna do what she can to make her man look a fool!”

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Six Sentence Sunday – 3/11/12 #sixsunday

I’m spending spring break (two glorious weeks!) wandering the country.  I’m taking my paper draft of my written WIP The Lone Wolf and my laptop with me, in the hopes that I’ll finally get it queriable.  (Disclaimer:  it’s probably queriable as it stands; I’m just too chicken to send it out.)

I plan on stopping in my MC Andrew’s hometown to see things on the ground him his POV, so this week’s six is his thoughts on his (unnamed in the story) Southern town, after he’s been away for about five years.

Downtown didn’t have much to offer:  a lot of empty storefronts with run-down apartments above them, a few discount stores selling stained furniture and hand-me-down wedding dresses, law offices and county political party headquarters, a half dozen bars.  The same generic face of shit hole towns it’d had when I left.  I picked a bar and headed inside.

The bar was mostly empty, not surprising for the middle of a weekday afternoon.  It’d get busy around four or five o’clock as everyone got off work and came over for a drink or five before going home to wives and girlfriends who nagged about rent money spent on booze, to whining children who didn’t understand why there wasn’t enough money for the latest trendy shoes and video games.  The guys gave in, of course, trying to make their kids happy because they remembered what it was like growing up and being the kid without, and as they sank deeper into debt the drinking didn’t help but it was an hour or two of postponing the inevitable, at least.

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Six Sentence Sunday – 3/4/12 #sixsunday

Building off last week’s six, this is from a short story I’m working on, “The Secretary,” which starts with Jessica bumping into a handsome guy on her first day of work.  In this excerpt, she’s getting a tour of the office.

Cheryl and I turned a corner and nearly collided with several people clustered together, deep in conversation.

“Jessica, these are the brains of the company: Ms. Thierry, Mr. Edison, and–“

“Aaron Cramer,” said the third person, turning around and smiling at me. “I believe we met this morning.”

Holy crap; I was fantasizing about the CEO of my new job. This would not end well.

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Six Sentence Sunday – 2/26/12 #sixsunday

To change it up a bit, this week’s six are from a short story/novella I’m working on, “The Secretary.”  On her first day at a new job, someone bumps into Jessica and the contents of her handbag spill all over the sidewalk.

“Is this yours?” asked a male voice.

I looked up into gray eyes set beneath perfectly tousled brown hair laced with streaks of gray. Despite being so much older than me, this man was quite possibly the most attractive male I had ever seen.

“Is this yours?” he repeated, smiling at me.

I looked at his hands and turned beet red, I’m sure, because he was holding the book I was reading, a trashy bodice-ripping romance novel. Why couldn’t I have grabbed Hemingway, Joyce, something that made me look smarter?

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Six Sentence Sunday – 2/19/12 #sixsunday

Today’s six are again from The Lone Wolf, my novel WIP.  Female MC Kasey, pregnant with male MC Andrew’s kid, appeals to his sense of pride while pressuring him for a final decision – admit that he loves her, or they’re through.

“I’ve given myself to you completely time and time again. That’s what love is; it’s opening yourself up and making yourself vulnerable to someone else. You keep casting me aside, rejecting me, and that means that either I’m stupid for coming back, for putting myself in that position, or that we really do need each other and you’re just not strong enough to admit it. And if that’s the case then fuck you, Andrew. You’re gonna have a daughter soon whether you like it or not, and I need someone who’s going to need me, to need us. If that’s not you, then we’re done, since I can’t keep putting myself out there to be thrown aside because you’re too weak to let me love you.”

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Six Sentence Sunday – 2/12/12 #sixsunday

From The Lone Wolf, my novel WIP. Female MC Kasey is fed up with male MC Andrew’s indecisiveness.

I led him outside, even though the day was cold and blustery, and asked, “So, is Alexis who you want?”

“Kasey,” Andrew sighed in exasperation, “I don’t know what I want. I’ve told you that. Have some faith, okay?”

“You need to figure it out because I’m not going to wait forever.” I leaned in and kissed him, long and deep, leaving him breathless, and walked away down the street.

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Six Sentence Sunday – 2/5/12 #sixsunday

Today’s six are from a short story I’m editing.  I wrote it last spring, let it marinate for awhile, and think I now have it figured out.

Their third evening together, sitting on the beach, Mhll had his arm around Grace when she said, “I wish I wasn’t leaving tomorrow.”

“You can’t leave.” He wrapped his arms more tightly around her, breathing in the smell of her hair. Maybe if he held her close enough, he could stop time, keep her here.

“Mhll, I’d love to stay here with you,” she said with a sigh, “but my trip here is just a vacation.”

“Marry me.”

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