This week’s six are from my novel that I’ll be starting to query this week. (Maybe if I say it enough, it’ll actually happen?) The main character Andrew is trying to break things off with the female MC, Kasey.
“I don’t want to hurt you but I’m going to, Kasey. I’m going to hurt you bad, and I don’t know how I’ll live with that. I don’t mean to, but I always disappoint the ones I love, and to be honest, I don’t really understand it myself. Maybe I hurt to keep from hurting?” He shook his head as if trying to clear his thoughts, wipe his mind fresh. “I can’t seem to control it, and loving and hurting both feel right, because both of them are part of me.”
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Good luck querying! It’s scary! But a good thing too.
I’ll keep my fingers crossed for you. And let us know how it goes. Good luck!
Lots of emotional duality in that snippet! He is horribly flawed, yet, I suspect he is likeable in his own way. Good six. Good luck on the query! :-)
Very intriguing…good luck with the queries!
wow, he’s one messed up dude! Good luck querying! I’m rooting for you!
Methinks he doth protest too much, some strong feelings there maybe? Intriguing six, liked the “voice”, good luck with the queries!
Great six! Good luck with your queries!!
Oh, that’s sad… I feel badly for him (and for her).
Good luck with your queries!
He is totally mixed up, doesn’t really know what he wants, does he?
Very powerful six!
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