Weekend Writing Warrior 6/19/16 #8Sunday

coverToday is Father’s Day, and what better way to celebrate than to continue with the five-part story I’ve been posting from this month, “A Family Tradition,” in my short story collection, The Futility of Loving a Soldier.

Background: Joos, who served in WWI (and whose story is told in the first part of “A Family Tradition”), is estranged from his son Maarten, a man who served during WWII and has spent his life battling his father’s legacy, as conveyed by his single mother, Ophélie. Joos has shown up at Maarten’s house, but Maarten isn’t sure if he’s ready to reconcile.

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“Ophélie wrote me to tell me you’d enlisted; she wanted to rub in that you were in combat and weren’t a coward like your father.” Joos stared at his son, his hands still playing with his hat, and said, “I sent her so many letters, trying to get her back and trying to see you, asking for forgiveness.”

“She never forgave you.” Even on her deathbed, Ophélie had cursed Joos.

“And that’s why I’m here, Maarten—I have cancer, most likely only a couple months left. There’s nothing the doctors can do, but I don’t want to die without you understanding my side of what happened. I want you to forgive me and to know what happened wasn’t my fault.”

Forgive my father?

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My great-grandfather in his WWI uniform (left) with his brother and sister.

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  1. I’d love to hear his side of the story. I’ll bet it’s interesting at the very least. Love the old photo!

  2. Loved the family photo you shared Enjoyed the snippet – I hope the son will listen to his Dad, let him tell his side of the story.

  3. Hmm. Nothing like starting out with the big guns of a cancer guilt trip. Maybe that will ensure that Maarten actually listens.

  4. So if he forgives his dad, he can be extra upset about Joos dying. But it’s an improvement over hating blindly.

  5. Talk about a steep price, but I’m definitely interested in hearing another version of the story…

  6. The old photo is fantastic. The cancer into is sure an attention getter. I am anxious to hear what else he has to say.

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