Weekend Writing Warriors 1/18/15 #8sunday

horseNew year, new story! This month I’ll be pulling from a novella series I’m working on, with each book based on a different fairy tale. Today’s snippet is from the first one (no title yet), which is a retelling of Beauty and the Beast.

MC Nyah lives with her younger sister Payton. They’d been joking around about Nyah’s betrothed and who Payton would marry.

* * * * * * * * * * *

Payton burst back into the cottage, her eyes wide, and said, “Nyah, you must see this!”

I hurried out after her.

She stood in our small yard and pointed towards the horizon, where a large cloud of dust hung over the hills, then asked, “What is that?”

I shook my head and said, “It’s too distant to see. Quick, fetch Father’s spyglass.”

She ran into the house and returned a moment later with the object.
I held it to my eye and trained it on the cloud, revealing a large band of men on horses. My heart leapt into my mouth; our small village would be no match for these men.

* * * * * * * * * * *

Post a link to your eight sentences blog entry, or join the fun at the Weekend Writing Warriors website.


  1. It just so happens, that Beauty and the Beast is one of my favorite fairytales, and based on this snippet, you’re going to do the tale justice. It’s a great start. (I’m not participating this week, just hopping around)

  2. What a cool idea for a series! Great beginning to this story.

  3. Ohh, what a scary scenario! You did a great job flipping from the sisters teasing each other about men to being in a situation that could be deadly. Great 8.

  4. Trouble afoot and what a great idea for a story. More, I want more.

  5. The part that ye old romances never mentioned, rowdy knights out for some plunder and pleasure.

  6. Uh oh, now I’m worried about them! I love retellings of Beauty and the Beast so I’m thoroughly hooked….great snippet! More, please 🙂

  7. Oh dear! I don’t suppose those men are coming to throw a party.

  8. Ahhh! Not good not good!

    I love the idea of a “spyglass.” I need one. Now. *off to etsy I go*

    Thanks for the great 8!

Comments are closed.

The Musings of E.D. Martin © 2011-2016 Frontier Theme