Six Sentence Sunday 5/27 #sixsunday

Here are another six from a story I wrote last week as part of the StoryADay Challenge. It’s a romancish story I’ve written the bare bones of and am working to expand.

“You’re so beautiful,” Daniel murmured, leaning in to kiss Mira’s ear.

She sprang away from him as if bitten, exclaiming, “Don’t say that!”

He sat up, tried to draw her into his arms, said, “But you are; you’re the most beautiful–”

Non,” she said as she beat at his chest with her small fists, “don’t ever say that to me!”

Baffled, all he could do was apologize and try to shield himself from her blows. As if sorry for her actions, Mira kissed him, and while Daniel was grateful for her touch, for her body pressed against his, he had trouble moving past the distant look in her eyes, as if he were someone else, as if she were someone else too.

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  1. Hm, sounds like Mira has some skeletons in her closet. Good six!

  2. Hmm, intriguing, certainly not the expected reaction. Excellent excerpt, makes me ponder what next!

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